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April 23, 2012
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Wait for a time, exactly under the star. Then, if a little man appears who laughs, who has golden hair and who refuses to answer questions, you will know who he is. If this should happen, please comfort me. Send me word that he has come back.

I met a boy. He wanted a sheep.
He gave me the gift of laughing stars.
I promised him I will not weep:
that secret will stay forever ours...
I met a boy. He owned a rose.
She's on his planet - very far.
I watch it every night - he knows...
And so, if you by chance are close
to the place where his footprints are -
Wait for a time, exactly under the star.

Then, if a little man appears who laughs,
who has golden hair
and who refuses to answer questions,
you will know who he is.

Then he will teach you how to see -
with your heart and not with you eyes,
how moody some flowers can be,
and how you should establish ties.
So prepare to be a little tamed,
just like it happened once to me.
And if you cry - he can't be blamed:
that's what comes with being tamed.
And so I have only one plea:
If this should happen, please comfort me.

Walk with him slowly to a well,
and watch how peaceful he's in sleep.
And ask him if his rose is well -
- I forgot the strap for his sheep...
I met a boy - my little prince,
and in this place I lost his track.
I haven't seen him ever since,
but you, I hope I can convince:
Don't leave me about him in black
Send me word that he has come back.
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23th poem for :iconnapowrimo2012:

A glosa for the #formfindsfunction's contest [link]



The text in italics is, of course, the ending of The Little Prince by A.S.Exupéry. It always makes me cry... You can read the book online here: [link]
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Hello! :la: I've featured your piece here!
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=MirachRavaia Sep 21, 2012   General Artist
Thank you!
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You're welcome! :heart:
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*gold-rose Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Because you're a member of :icondalinksystem: your work is featured in this journal [link] :aww:
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=MirachRavaia Jun 26, 2012   General Artist
Thank you very much!
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Mood: Love *DragonRider3 May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Little prince.. :)
I ever told that I totally adore that little tale? :love:
And so nice poem to go with it! :clap:
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=MirachRavaia May 25, 2012   General Artist
I was quite sure you do :D
Thank you!
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Mood: Love *DragonRider3 May 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Some of his characteristics are actually a little bit inspiration for Liron ;)
You are welcome! :heart:
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=MirachRavaia May 26, 2012   General Artist
I thought so :)
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~AElfrics-Cat May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Laughing stars and moody flowers make this verse even more beautiful. Just lovely.
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