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He was the fire
Devouring flame
Wine until bottom
And pain of fame

He was my father
His anger like flood
We sealed our Oath
In fire and blood

The flame extinguished
By Oath we're still bound
Through tears and pain
No rest to be found

The blood on my hands
And my hand in chains
What was it for
When nothing remains?

The Light we sought, burns
So close, yet so far
We are not worthy
To touch a star

Burning flame, take me
And clean the stain
Take the cursed Jewel
And end my pain!

In fire it started
In fire it ends
Just like my father
The fire in my veins
Maedhros, son of Fëanor

Contest price for :iconkittykatkanie: for the 1st place in the "Elflings" contest held by :iconelves-of-tolkien:

She wanted a poem about Maedhros in love, and if not in love, then just about him... I'm sorry Nelyo, I'm not good in writing romances. So here is a tragical poem about Maedhros...

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DaughterOfLaurelin Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing! Great job!! :o (Eek) 
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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Rosyan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
...wow... I have no words.
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:iconmirachravaia:
MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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Cvokhauz Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
Such a beautiful poem!
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:iconmirachravaia:
MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconcvokhauz:
Cvokhauz Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
You're welcome :)
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airysilvertail Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh! I love it so much! :) May I ask you for a permission to translate this poem into russian? Of course with all links to the original and so on...
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I'm really glad you like it! You are welcome to try translating it. I have the translation of the first verse to Slovak, maybe it'll help you as it's a Slavic language as well:

Bol hukot ohňa
Bol plameň dravý
Víno až do dna
A bolesť slávy
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Cvokhauz Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
And so much similar to czech :)
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