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I am the land
I am the stone
I am its breath
I am its bone

I am the song
brought with the wind
Ever present
but never seen

I am the spark
in the lake‘s eyes
The arms of trees
And wings of night

As old as hills
As deep as sea
Forever young
Forever free...
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TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
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This is just beautiful, and I am just thrilled I have found it!
Wonderful job. :heart:
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! :hug:
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indiana-w Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Writer
Simple, but well-timed, with charming assonance, pleasant images, and an uplifting spirit.
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
There can be great truth and beauty housed in simplicity. :heart:
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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RavenSummerisle Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastic! Im in awe, so simple, yet sooo beautiful, thanks for sharing!
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! I don't normally post links to my work in comments, but when I saw your gallery, I thought you might like it
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RavenSummerisle Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
definitely! Lol, the link is appreciated, dont worry about it!
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Lirulin-yirth Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
It's very beautiful - perhaps I've already said it =)
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Lirulin-yirth Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010
My pleasure!
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likeliquid Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful example of nature for the Nature Feature! I hope many more people can appreciate your work :)
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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PoseidensHeir Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
such a vivid image i see thank you for this picture you've painted me
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for your kind words!
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Reanimated4now Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Professional General Artist
how wonderfully encompassing and yet concise at the same time, I like this very much. maybe the only thing that picked at me was 'wings of nights' rather than 'of night'

:) bravo

,Nick
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! It's only my 2nd poem in English, so I'm really glad that you like it! I used nights because of the rhyme, should I change it to night?
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Reanimated4now Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Professional General Artist
it would probably flow a little better and be more um..smooth yet logical? You are definitely doing extraordinarily well if that is only your second poem in english everyone seems to say the language is really difficult to learn. :)
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! I'll change it then! :rose:
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paranoiaprincess83 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing! I love this piece :D :love:
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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paranoiaprincess83 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome :)
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EnglishOutcastRollin Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2010
aww.
so lovely, so powerful too.
I like it!! ^^
(lol)
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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^^
you're very welcome!!
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Lunacy-Enfolds Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009   Writer
Simple and beautiful. I always like poems that connect with nature =)
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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Lunacy-Enfolds Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009   Writer
your welcome =)
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Sirielle Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009   Digital Artist
Beautiful song! Thank you for the link :thanks:
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I gladly provided it... It can be even classified as self-advertisement :D I'm glad that you like it, thank you very much for the comment and :+fav: !
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Nosterineth Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
Wow, this is wonderful Mirach! Made me think of "The Voice" by... Celtic Woman, wasn't it? Argh, I don't remember at the moment, but the song is awesome!
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner May 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I didn't hear the song, so I'm going to listen to it when I get the chance!
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openmeadow Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Student Writer
Ah, lovely job yet again! One of should turn the random RPs we did into a story one of these days :D
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner May 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm not sure if I understand: you are turning them into a story?
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openmeadow Featured By Owner May 10, 2009  Student Writer
Eeks, if only I had that kind of time! No, I was just suggesting that one (or both) of us do something with them someday :D
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Windsurfbabe Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
As I said: lovely!
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MirachRavaia Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, for now I left it so, maybe i'll change it later
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