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A man knelt on the blood-soaked battlefield. He was the last one. The last of the Ar-Venui, the Swords of Death: Nothing to live for, just looking for something to die for. A sword was hanging above his head. The last rays of the dying sun were like a road to the oblivion…

And the sword did not fall.

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I am your only faithful one:
the lover of your pains
And when fate rides a chariot
them I'm holding the reins
Listen!
A song beats in your veins


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Once, long ago, Ar-Tenil had a wife, and a son that had to be born soon. Then the Lowlanders came to conquer the Mountains and discover the place of a great power from an old legend – The Heart of the Mountain. He never heard of that place. The chaos of fight, one moment, one decision. He saved many lives that day – but for them, his wife died. Now he is looking for the sons of the women he saved, to take them as a repayment of their debt, and train them as the new Ar-Venui. But a surprise awaits him - not all of them are boys.

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My eyes mirror the universe
and evening roses paint my lips
A veil of shadow is my hair
My laughter binds you - and then keeps
Let go!
And drink me with full sips


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The Emperor of the Lowlands is dying. He calls for his sons, the Derhain. Born of victory, they are the sons of the women he took after a won battle. Only one of them will become the new Emperor: the one who emerges victorious from the fights among them, with the blood of his brothers staining his hands. But one of the Derhain – a golden haired boy – might be more than he seems, while another is one of the boys that Ar-Tenil is looking for.

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Now lean to my ear, my beloved
and whisper: what has sense?
What has a meaning when you feel
me beside you in dance?
Fight!
Be worthy of my hands!


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In the heart of the Empire, something forgotten is stirring. A Thief of souls, an unseen danger. It controls its bearer, eating the soul from inside out, until only a shell is left. It is hungry, and it wants to get the power of the Heart of the Mountain. Old legends assume a different form and rise again to stop it, because the history repeats. But someone, sometimes, has to break the circle...

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My kisses are freezingly sweet:
all pain and sorrow you forget
I'm watching every step of thee
until you get where you should get
So don't be sad!
I'm waiting for you

Yours truly

Death
:iconmirachravaia:
The synopsis of my NaNoWriMo novel.
Some of the characters:

Kaldir

Mirach

Svarik
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:iconninquetari:
I already told you I think it's really interesting and I would love to read it. Good luck! :hug:
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=MirachRavaia Dec 1, 2011   General Artist
I hope you will be able to sometimes! Thank you very much!
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:iconninquetari:
It's up to you, you know. You're most welcome!
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~Annathelle26 Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It is extremely interesting!!!! At first I didn't quite understand what is the main base of the story, but after reading it again, I think it's clearer. I love the change from text to poem and the mystery atmosphere. You write very good!!:D
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=MirachRavaia Nov 27, 2011   General Artist
The story is quite complicated and has a few separate storylines that come together at one point, so it's hard to get the main idea without revealing too much. I'm glad you find it interesting, thank you!
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Mood: Drooling *DragonRider3 Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally totally totally totally totally totally love it! :iconlove--plz:
But that was quite to be expected knowing
1) basics of your story
2) myself... :D
I said it once before, but am really really glad you managed to contribute so many more words to your story this month! I am really happy for you! I read it not, of course... But, knowing you, I know you done a great job! :cuddle:

I think I am in slight advantage over poor souls that will read this synopsis and then become downhearted for english version won't come in some ten years ( :( ) I at least have some main idea how the plot develops :dance:

But for lot others, I fear I would have to wait, at least till next November :eager:
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=MirachRavaia Nov 27, 2011   General Artist
Thank you very much! I hope you will be able to read the story in a finite amount of time :D
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*DragonRider3 Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
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I don't know why, but *finite amount of time* sounds not really encouraging :D
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~Embrethil Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I hope you do finish it, because it sounds awesome. :D I would definitely buy it.
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=MirachRavaia Nov 26, 2011   General Artist
Thank you very much! That's good to hear, but it may take some time, because I need to
a) finish it, and
b) translate it to English
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