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November 2, 2012
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Of tired feathers silken touch,
The ancient tale of pilgrimage
When maple leaves turn red and gold
The soaring spirits know no cage

Goodbye to mists and fading fern
To silver threads of gossamer
The rosehips red and bitter sloes
Until the spring comes young and fair

Goodbye to songs in dreamy dusk
And the warm nests of sunny youth
When wings are weak, the will is strong
And stars will guide us to the South

To the far lands where winter winds
Do not have power over Sun,
So we can return in the spring,
Because home... home is only one.
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For the :iconunframed-nature:'s contest "Bold Perspectives on Autumn" [link]
I think that there hardly is a bolder perspective on autumn than that one of the migratory birds. Hight from the sky, they watch the autumn colors of the land as they start their long journey, often thousands of kilometers, and not all of them will survive it... But those who do, will return again in the spring to build their nests again.
(I do realize this is true only in some places of the globe - if you are in a country where the birds come for winter instead, you'll have to use your imagination...)
The poem uses alliteration at least once in every stanza. I recommend reading the poem alloud :)
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*vikingjon Jan 31, 2013  Professional General Artist
Very lovely words to capture the feel of Autumn.
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=MirachRavaia Feb 5, 2013   General Artist
Thank oyu very much!
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:wave: This work is featured here: [link] . :aww:
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=MirachRavaia Nov 30, 2012   General Artist
Thank you very much!
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This beautiful work is featured here: [link] . :heart:
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=MirachRavaia Nov 30, 2012   General Artist
Thank you very much!
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Please follow this link instead: [link] . Sorry for the inconvenience.
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=MirachRavaia Nov 22, 2012   General Artist
Thank you!
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It was a real pleasure!:icontruesmiles:
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