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diagonal tutorial

by =MirachRavaia, Apr 5, 2012, 8:41:02 AM
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The diagonal is a form based on overlapping internal rhymes:

- every rhyme consists of a fixed number of syllables, usually 4 (but you can experiment with the number)

- the number of rhymes per line grows with every line until the maximum number, and then it decreases again, creating a diagonal pattern

- you can add as many rhymes as you want, and the maximum number of rhymes per line is also up to you - 2 is simplest, and with increasing the number it's getting more difficult.

- Here is the rhyming scheme with maximum of 2 rhymes per line. You can continue as far as you want, just remember to end with one rhyme (principially it's just a different form of the aabb scheme):

a
a b
b c
     c d
        d e
           e ...
              ...

- Wih 4 rhymes/line it would be:

a
a b
a b c
a b c d
   b c d ...
     c d ...
        d ...
          ...

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Your mind has wings from Music wrought
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What you can think to the last dot, that I will call to make a world
The horse's trott, the fir-trees tall, the heat and cold
The creatures small, and big and bold
Just as I've told:

Eä! Be!

diagonal like lapping waves,
or plaited braids, these syllables
return in staid and cyclical interactions.
foundations laid, this lexical liquefaction then inundates
with lyrical benefaction which will placate
as compaction consolidates
what one dictates.

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=deinktvis Apr 5, 2012 Student Writer

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=MirachRavaia Apr 5, 2012 General Artist

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